Six Hours Early

Episode summary

The tide beats the revised forecast. The checked system lifts, but an old outer mooring begins dragging the workshop towards the water.

Transcript

Six Hours Early

The Houses We Carry, episode 13. 15 vertical sequences, 60 panels.

Sequence 1: The birds leave first

Neri watches birds leave the low pilings from a protected upper window. Rising water covers the painted marks outside. Neri turns to Mara, who looks towards the harbour watch and tells them to stay at the window.

Neri: "They have all gone up."

Mara: "Stay at this window."

Sequence 2: The revised window

Mara relays the radio report beside the revised lift-window notice, with Neri and Anja listening. Tamsin checks the notice and clock while Edda watches. Ivo and Oren stand ready. Mara takes the approved sequence sheet.

Mara: "The rise is advancing through the channel."

Tamsin: "Six hours before the revised window."

Ivo: "We are on the watch. We have the checks."

Mara: "Then we use them."

Sequence 3: People before the sequence

Edda leads Anja towards the upper common room. Oren checks the household count. Neri remains at the protected window while Mara prepares to go to the control bay.

Edda: "The lower walkway is closing."

Oren: "Everyone on the declared list is here."

Mara: "Keep the window closed if spray reaches it."

Sequence 4: A clear channel

Tamsin orders the outer channel closed over the radio. A red signal stops passing boats. Two trained harbour crew check the installed teal and brass stabiliser. Mara and Ivo enter the protected control bay.

Tamsin: "Close the outer channel to passing traffic."

Mechanic: "Crew in position."

Sequence 5: The approved sequence

Mara hangs her ochre jacket on a hook in the control bay and reads the approved sheet in her charcoal shirt. Ivo operates the inspected replacement valve. Mara watches five indicators within their marked bands. Five houses stand above their large white caissons in the rising water.

Ivo: "The replacement responds."

Mara: "Continue within the bands."

Sequence 6: Lift

Five houses lift together above the water. Edda steadies her blue bowl on its cloth beside Anja. Oren feels his foundation move. Anja holds her room key and recognises her new floor.

Oren: "That is my foundation moving."

Anja: "And this is my floor."

Sequence 7: What the checks can tell

Mara and Ivo monitor the repaired branch. Tamsin records the guided connections staying within travel. The trained crew watch the stabiliser. Below them, a separate rusty mooring bracket takes strain against an old masonry wall.

Ivo: "The repaired branch is holding."

Tamsin: "The guided connections are within travel."

Sequence 8: A sound from outside

The old external bracket pulls at crumbling masonry. Neri watches a taut line through the protected window and alerts Mara. Mara looks out from inside. Neri points towards the line beyond the workshop.

Neri: "That line was slack before."

Mara: "Which line?"

Neri: "The one past the workshop."

Sequence 9: The old tie

Mara and Tamsin examine an older mooring drawing. Tamsin observes the taut rope from behind a rail. The rusty bracket pulls an empty timber landing beside the workshop. Ivo watches from the sheltered doorway.

Mara: "An old outer tie. Outside the repaired network."

Tamsin: "The rising terrace is taking its slack."

Ivo: "It is drawing the landing under us."

Sequence 10: Stop the drift

Mara sees the lateral indicator approaching its limit and calls a hold. Ivo holds the controls. The harbour crew steady the movement with the installed stabiliser. Five houses remain afloat while the separate workshop landing tilts.

Mara: "Hold the next stage."

Ivo: "Holding."

Mechanic: "We can steady this movement. For now."

Sequence 11: What is attached

Ivo opens the workshop inventory beside the old landing drawing. Mara asks whether the workshop can be cleared. Ivo looks at the lathe behind its closed glazed door, then closes the inventory.

Ivo: "The workshop floor is tied to that landing."

Mara: "Can it be cleared?"

Ivo: "Not with people on that floor now."

Sequence 12: A boundary kept

Neri looks through the closed workshop door at the tools and lathe. Ivo joins them on the safe side. Neri grips their bird notebook anxiously. Ivo tells them he is staying.

Neri: "Your tools are in there."

Ivo: "So is the lathe."

Ivo: "I am staying here."

Sequence 13: The release point

Mara and the qualified mechanic examine the old connection drawing. Mara confirms that the release can be worked from the dry bay. Tamsin compares the old tie with the foundation record. Mara traces the workshop connection, and Ivo listens in silence.

Mara: "The release can be worked from the dry bay."

Tamsin: "Keep the repaired network isolated from that loss."

Mara: "The workshop goes with the landing."

Sequence 14: Consent under pressure

Ivo watches his lathe through the protected window. Mara waits beside him without promising to save it. Ivo looks towards Neri behind the upper-room door and chooses the inhabited houses. Tamsin hands the release plan to the crew.

Mara: "I cannot promise to save it."

Ivo: "Save the houses with people in them."

Sequence 15: The next movement

The old bracket tears further from the wall but its mooring rope remains taut and attached to the tilted workshop landing. Mara and the mechanic take their positions in the dry bay. Ivo holds the watch while Tamsin listens on the radio. The final view shows the still-attached workshop over turbulent water, with the inhabited houses beyond. The release has not happened yet.

Mara: "On the crew signal."

End of episode 13.

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